A dangerous bond of
Self aroused interest
Candid smiles and chirpy frowns
Lost in you for days so long
You said U love
And I said I do
You showed me heaven
And heaven I saw
Together we entwined
We became one
A reason for my being
Came into being
But u cried and said
you had to go
I saw your face
With a restless pace
I saw you leave
But couldn’t let you go
The love and the feel
I will make it stay
Still feel your feel
Still cherish your smile
Our love will live
Yes in my womb it stands
All want it gone
But stay it will
In me you will stay
As my life at stake
As my love’s keepsake
Yes in me you will stay
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ReplyDeleteHi Mr Anonymous,
ReplyDeleteYou can easily reach me at my email ID harshadgr8@gmail.com or b_sriharsha@satyam.com.
Well me too have been new to wutravel so I cant say much.
I would be happy to help you but I dont think the comments section is the right place for this kind of communication as this part is dedicated for creative poetry and its critics.
Hope u understand my concern.
Do mail me:)
Here pathos and quibble blend well. The opening stanza is the best.
ReplyDelete"A dangerous bond of
Self aroused interest
Candid smiles and chirpy frowns
Lost in you for days so long
You said U love
And I said I do"
Thanks
Nanda
Thanks Mr. Nanda,
ReplyDeleteIts been ages since I last saw you.It was wonderful to see you again.
Thanks for liking my lines:)
Harsha