the word is OPPORTUNITY.
Its a mnemonic poem.Here it goes:
Osculation was the start which
Prodded her vanity
Pulled her dignity
Ostracied her from society
Rumours floated afresh
Tart she was called
Until she saw him stalled
Not a sign of regret
Inches from her but still the same
Trying to find a new victim of rape
Yearning for a new OPPORTUNITY
Written by the word OPPORTUNITY from the site
Acrostic Only
Tried to convey the difference of treatment between a rapist and a victim.
At one side the women(victim) is looked down.
whereas the rapist roams freely.
~Harsha
Thanks for joining the fun.
ReplyDeleteThis is good for a first. Keep the word together and don't break it up. Bold the first letter on each line ..
I posted your link so that others can read this ... look forward to reading some more of your acrostics.
i am looking forward to read more from you :)
ReplyDeleteHmmmm.... nice one!! I liked it... Acrostics have so much in them. I'm currently taking up a workshop which is teaching me how to write a perfect one. If you want, you may join too. Contact Amias for the same.
ReplyDeleteKeep writing :)
A very different take and so very true Harsha, even i don't know the intricacies of an Acrostic, but i loved the message and your effort.
ReplyDeleteVery honest. Often victims are ostracized which diminishes any true effects of justice. Great poem.
ReplyDelete@Amias
ReplyDeleteThanks Amias.I knew about the 1st letter to be bold.But my firewall blocked that function.
Thanx 4 d wonderful advice.
Iw ould adhere to it in future.
@americanisingdesi
I too am coming man to write more:D
@Tan
Thanx Tan 4 d compliment.
A workshop.Hmm sounds gud.
@Sudharm
Thanx man.
Actually at a lot of places,its your findings that I am using.Thnx 4 shwing d path
@Ofira
I agree.And thanx 4 spotting me by.
~Harsha
beautiful and honest write!
ReplyDelete@Leo
ReplyDeleteThanx a ton dear