DESIRE hushed(Me forlorned)

REH NA PAYA YE DIL YAHA SUN KE SADA TUMHARI

My ODE to a wonderful prose by gulzar

Wid due repect to him I have added my thoughts to his great thoughts:D

BLUE is wat I wrote.

RED is d original one.

And GREEN is its meaning(not mine)

HERE IT GOES:-



Hazaron khwahishe aisi ki har khwahish pe dum nikle,
Bahut nikle mere armaan lekin fir bhi kum nikle

Thousands of desires, each worth dying for...many of them I have realized...yet I yearn for more...

"Kami thi ye shabdo ki ya kami thi ye lafzo ki
jeena chahta tha maut ko par zindagi p bhi dum nikale

Wanted to love a life dat made sense
Wanted to live a love dat had no pretence"

Nikalna durg se aadam ka sunte aaye they, lekin
bahut be-aabru hokar tere kuche se hum nikle

We have heard about the dismissal of Adam from Heaven,With a more humiliation, I am leaving the street on which you live...

"socha tha ki kam se kam galia(streets) teri to janengi mujhe
koshish karengi samajhne ki aur pehchanengi mujhe
Dil me to ab hum tere hai nahe
Kaash in rasto me hi dam nikale

Afloat I was in a world astray
Sangunity lost and silence wid me 2 stay
Ran thru gloom wid my past upfront
I dont remember whether death kissed me or I kissed death"

Hazaron khwahishe aisi.....
Thousands of desires as such...

Mohabbat me nahi h fark jeene aur marne ka,
Usi ko dekhkar jeete h jis kaafir par dum nikle

When in love, there is little difference between life and deathwe live by looking at the infidel who we are willing to die for
"Koshish ki thi ki tham lu in palo ko,tham lu mei sirf aur sirf is sehar ko
janta tha ki maut thi subah,janta hu mei ki maut hai subah
par ye jaante hue bhi,chahta hu ki tere deedar p hi dum nikale
Maut hansegi mujhpe,par chahta hu....
Ki tere tassavur p hi dum nikale


Now u cudnt say NO nor cud u say YES
Coz now I waited no longer
No 1 hated me any stronger
If all was dere was but my weepin corpse smilin hard
I know now u want to hug me
Now u want to luv me
But den wat was left was not me
But den wat was left was not me"

Hazaron khwahishe aisi.....
Thousands of desires as such....

Harsha