As I stretch my hand
My blades hurt
I scamper to a rescue
but my veins thrust
I pull whats all within
and let out one last cry
with sweat in my eyes
and blood in breath
I yearn to instigate everything
that has not turned death
The silence tickles
as if insane
The time trickles
as if it would never wane
But there I see the hourglass
Losing all the sand
There I see my life
losing all that could be grand
I had promised myself
that I would hold that time
I had promised myself
that I would fight this time
So,one last time
I stretch my hand
My blades hurt
And ah,
I hold the time.
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Written for Magpie Tales
~Harsha
Raw and powerful. I really liked this.
ReplyDelete"I yearn to instigate everything/that has not turned death"
ReplyDeleteThat is such a powerful poemful line.
Thought-provoking and a powerful piece of writing.
ReplyDeleteCJ xx
what strength in these words.
ReplyDeleteBeautiful Harsha, keep reaching, fighting..
ReplyDeleteRene
if only we could hold the time...vivid imagery...nice mag!
ReplyDeleteI read this twice and I like it very much. Time I don't believe it ever wanes especially when you have to fight.
ReplyDelete@Willow
ReplyDeleteThanks Willow.I too had the raw feeling when I wrote it.
@Mrs.Trellis
Might sound funny.But the moment I wrote it,I knew this line would be the center of this poem.
@Crystal Jigsaw
Thanks Crystal for feeling so.
@kathew
Hopefully this strength gets exuberant back on me that I have been searching since log.
@Rene
Thanks Rene.Yes,poems have become a way of life.Atleast to keep sanding:)
@Brian Miller
Thanks Brian.Prompts having a center are so good only cause we are able to see the wide thought variations.
This is my first time in Magpie and really loved it.
@Kristen Haskell
Thanks Kristen.It feels so happy when people really appreciate your work.
Time would ever wane.
Thanks a ton to all of you for taking time and visiting.
This is my first visit to magpie but was very interesting.Wud surely come back.
~Harsha
very well said!
ReplyDeleteDetermined !!!
ReplyDeletetrue words,
ReplyDeletelovely penned.
@Priyanka Bhomwick
ReplyDeleteThaks for feeling so.
Thanks for visiting.
@A-Key
HA bhai determined
@Jingle
Thanks Jingle.
Thanks for your time
~Harsha
Nice.....
ReplyDelete@Sahil Raka
ReplyDeleteRaka bhai aapka ana hi pavitrata hai.Thanks:)