Captured for
Osculating in a
Nation where
Freedom
Itself was a
Never used
Entity
Meant
Eternal
Nativity bound to
Tenacious captivity
Written for the word CONFINEMENT
for the site
Acrostic Only
I have tried to capture the agony undergone by people stuck up in nations where free speech.equality,expression is all but a distant dream.
And how in such a country even a small gesture of love,such as kissing can lead to immense punishments such as CONFINEMENT.
My try at freedom
~HARSHA
Ah too good a try and laconic too Kudos!
ReplyDeleteYou did quite well with this -- the message is clear. Thank you for joining the fun, and I am looking forward to reading more of your acrostics.
ReplyDeletevery true man...too gud...keep writing...
ReplyDeleteNICE ....
ReplyDeleteHi Hasha,
ReplyDeleteCongratulation! I am happy to announce that your poem was chosen as “Honorable Mentions” in our "Best Weekly Acrostic" contest. Your acrostic is amazing, and I certainly appreciate your participation.
@Winnie the poohi
ReplyDeleteThanx dear.
@Amias
Its great fun Amias.I 2 am on d bandwagon now;)
@Rishi
Thanx bhai,u liked it.
@GotyBaaz
Are wah bhai p bhai.
Thanx yar
@Amias
THANX Amias.
I was sceptical while writin because I actually dnt know how to write an acrostic.
This was infact my second.
Cudnt join your workshop due to certain constraints.
So,watever comments you people exchanged,was the source of my learnings.
Thanx again to all for teaching me.
Wud try better next tym.
~Harsha
Very powerful poem - congratulations for receiving Honorable Mention.
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